Thursday, July 3, 2014

The Solar powered Roller coaster by Jiya and Jorden


Hi Everyone,
Above in the link that you can click to learn all about the solar powered roller coaster!
We hope you speed your way there,
Jorden and Jiya. 
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2 comments:

  1. Sophie.cJuly 3, 2014 at 4:55 PM

    Wow, what a awesome invention. I love how you have a lot of detail.

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  2. AlJuly 5, 2014 at 5:10 PM

    Wow Jiya and Jorden! Like Sophie said your invention was a great idea.

    Feed back:
    ~ Your diagram painted a big picture.
    ~ Your paragraphs were so factual.
    ~ Also your whole piece of writing made me want to read it again.

    Feed forward:
    ~ I think you needed to have a bit more information but I didn't really take notice.

    I think you invention gave you I think about......
    Above 70%.

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