Great concept Josh & Tauvaga hopefully you can get this project up and running but I don't think the major car corporations will be happy with this! Good to see you have given some thought to the environment and fossil fuels. Nice work boys
Great job on finishing you guys! You did so well to finish your project.
Feed back: ~ You idea was creative and original. ~ just from reading the front page I am wanting to read more. ~ Factual paragraphs were basically a must and you achieved factual paragraphs. ~ How does it work page was kind of an explanation. ~ Awesome vocabulary and great wording. ~ Parts paragraph was very intriguing and it explained a lot. I would have an even longer Feed back list if I didn't say this... The rest of you project was awesome.
Feed forward: ~ Some parts in your project didn't make that much sense.
Capital WOW! I can't believe how practical your invention is! I thought it would cost a lot of money and materials to build it and get the car just right. But it actually isn't... I seriously think this is a really good concept of off the grid. I also agree with Al. Some sentences didn't make that much sense, but AMAZING JOB GUYS!!!! Maybe you could do this for science fair next year!?!?!?!
Wow what a great enquiry project. I want a Hydro Powered car.
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You guys are going to be rich if you sell these Hyrdo Powered cars.
ReplyDeleteWell done!
Aub CN
I wish we could do this in room 2
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Great concept Josh & Tauvaga hopefully you can get this project up and running but I don't think the major car corporations will be happy with this! Good to see you have given some thought to the environment and fossil fuels. Nice work boys
ReplyDeleteGreat job on finishing you guys! You did so well to finish your project.
ReplyDeleteFeed back:
~ You idea was creative and original.
~ just from reading the front page I am wanting to read more.
~ Factual paragraphs were basically a must and you achieved factual paragraphs.
~ How does it work page was kind of an explanation.
~ Awesome vocabulary and great wording.
~ Parts paragraph was very intriguing and it explained a lot.
I would have an even longer Feed back list if I didn't say this... The rest of you project was awesome.
Feed forward:
~ Some parts in your project didn't make that much sense.
Nice job boys!
Capital WOW!
ReplyDeleteI can't believe how practical your invention is! I thought it would cost a lot of money and materials to build it and get the car just right. But it actually isn't... I seriously think this is a really good concept of off the grid. I also agree with Al. Some sentences didn't make that much sense, but AMAZING JOB GUYS!!!!
Maybe you could do this for science fair next year!?!?!?!