Wow! Your creativity is AMAZING! Your facts are awesome and you have explained the Idea so well. I can imagine a solar powered RC plane, you should keep working on that idea! In 15 years or so you might just be the creator of the worlds first solar powered RC plane! :)
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Wow!
ReplyDeleteYour creativity is AMAZING! Your facts are awesome and you have explained the Idea so well. I can imagine a solar powered RC plane, you should keep working on that idea! In 15 years or so you might just be the creator of the worlds first solar powered RC plane! :)
Just like Grace said Wow!
ReplyDeleteFeed back:
~ You had expressive vocabulary. Example petroleum and efficient.
~ I think you worked really hard.
~ You paragraphs were factual and interesting.
~ The title wanted me to read more!
Feed forward:
~ You could have added a bit more information.
Well done Max! Also keep it up.