Thursday, July 3, 2014

Our Wheel Turbine by Sam and Milly

This link will take you to our Google document for our Off the Grid invention.
We worked really hard on this and would love any feedback and feedforward.
Thanks heaps,
Milly and Sam

2 comments:

  1. I wish I could use this instead of petrol. You go girls. Mel

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  2. Oh my you girls came up with an amazing topic title. Congratulations!

    Feed back:
    ~ You idea was original kind of like I said before.
    ~ The pros and cons table was a great choice.
    ~ Your pie graph was spacious so the reader could easily read it.
    ~ The vocabulary was placed perfectly.
    ~ I was glad you had a caption next to the invention diagram.
    ~ It was awesomely great that you had brackets next to your parts. ;]
    ~ Lets just say 0% of feed forward!

    Feed forward:
    ~ Blank. [Nothing at all.]

    Keep it up Sam and Milly!

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