Thursday, April 17, 2014

Tino's Report


The best feature of my report was my conclusion.
I learnt all these fish are not going to be around for a long time because they might become extinct. This means if we lose one thing in the food chain then we could lose a lot more food. I need to work on my punctuation, full stops and commas mostly!

Thanks for reading, Tino. 
BTW, If you ever find a live fish on the beach, please put it back in the sea. 
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9 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 17, 2014 at 9:40 AM

    I love your fun facts Tino
    By Egan

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    1. AnonymousApril 19, 2014 at 5:04 PM

      I agree Egan they are fun facts and very interesting I love the back round a lot.

      By Aleezio

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    2. AnonymousApril 21, 2014 at 9:37 AM

      thanks egan for that comment it was really nice of you to say that. from tino
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  2. MissMatichApril 17, 2014 at 9:44 AM

    wow your information report is very cool and also intersting.

    by sophie.c

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    1. AnonymousApril 21, 2014 at 9:40 AM

      thx sophie and your report was also amazing as well ; ) from tino

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  3. AnonymousApril 17, 2014 at 9:55 AM

    Tino I thought your report was awesome I never new about the saw fish it fantastic a nose like a chainsaw wow did you know that the manatees lungs are two thirds of its size wow
    from Zach

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    1. AnonymousApril 21, 2014 at 9:44 AM

      thanks Zach and that is very interesting O_O that a manatees lungs are two thirds of its size! from tino

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  4. GraceApril 17, 2014 at 10:04 AM

    Nice Job!
    I learnt a lot about the saw fish, I loved the way you put some of yourself into the report to make it even more interesting! =D I also enjoyed seeing the species page, that bit was amazing!! xD Just a question how long did this take you to write this?

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  5. Sam ;DApril 17, 2014 at 10:09 AM

    TINO!
    You are sooooooo supportive to Sawfish. I have never heard of this in my life. Your report stands above with the crowd along with the rest our class. Reports are valuable and I have got to say you are improving. It was awesome to see the humour but remember reports are still factual. Just a wee flaw, I would like to see you add more information. Still though I do feel informed. We are all taking our way to "Success!" and by the looks of it, it feels like you're swimming! That was quite a journey you have embarked on. Your report is solid GOLD!
    Astonishing to accomplish a well typed report.
    Hope we never stop doing information reports.
    Peace out! (:

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