The best feature of my report was the Q&A page. I also think the introduction is very well written. I learnt a lot about Manatees! My favourite fact is: Manatees eat 50% of their bodyweight!
I think my next step would be having an adaptions page and also some more diagrams instead of pictures. I would also like to add some more photos.
By Grace
Marvelous!
ReplyDeleteThis is completely inspiring for me. Your report was very factual and I have learnt so much about the Manatee. What I like is how you were so pumped up and enthusiastic to learn about this particular animal. Like you're a sponge and just want to suck all the information in. You put alot of unexpected effort. From this report I can see you were really surfing the web for this and I am absolutely proud of you Grace for your creativeness and excellence you have achieved. Your report makes me think about how you used this presentation as a canvas and all that knowledge as the paint. Your learning has made me more enthusiastic to create more reports. Outstanding Job Grace!
Wow Sam, I love your metaphor for learning. What a fabulous way to describe Grace's Information report. Miss Matich
DeleteWow, Gracie! Nice work. I had no idea that manatees could live 60 years. That's almost as old as Nana!
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