The best feature of my report is the introduction because it makes you want to read more.
I learnt what Emperor Penguins threats are because I really wanted to know what their threats were.
My next step is to make longer paragraph because I don't think mine are long enough.
I will do tho by doing more specific research, adding a fact and then an explanation.
Nice job Sophie!!! You did such a great job waddling with the Emperor Penguins. You did such a great job putting the factual word into sentences. Putting factual sentences into paragraphs. Putting factual paragraphs into headings. Finally putting factual headings in to an amazing information report. Keep it up Soph!!!
ReplyDeleteTrue Al, she did put factual stuff into EVERYTHING! You've done a impressive amount of work. I can't imagine a person who doesn't think that this is overwhelming.
DeleteWhat I think the thing that stands out is that almost everything starts out in a different opener. If this is what you love doing never give up because to me this is fun. This shows that you are a responsible trust-worthy Ruma Iwa Unstoppable. Never forget about this because report this is one of your tools for success in learning. We are very lucky that you are in our class. Keep up the good work.
P.S Your report is valuable like a polished diamond.