Check out my report, it's awesome!
I think my best feature of my report is my introduction because it's capturing. It makes the audience want to read more.
I've learnt so many interesting facts about the Moray Eel, like the baby moral eel is called a leptocephali.
My next step is to check my punctuation, so Miss Matich doesn't need to fix lots of it.
I think my best feature of my report is my introduction because it's capturing. It makes the audience want to read more.
I've learnt so many interesting facts about the Moray Eel, like the baby moral eel is called a leptocephali.
My next step is to check my punctuation, so Miss Matich doesn't need to fix lots of it.
By Neha.
Awesome!
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I have learned lots of important facts. The moray eel is so intriguing and yes you were right Neha, it does capture the audience. In fact, if this report was on the top of the clouds, I wouldn't have given up to get up there until I see your report. To me your report feels like having some scrumptious orange chocolate chip ice cream! (Except I don't want to eat it. ;D) Congratulations! You have discovered the land of "Sucess!" Neha is up to the true Ruma Iwa Unstoppable level. I discovered what it's like to be trapped in the moray eel body. (Although I prefer the human body. :P)
Anyways thanks Neha for showing us the interesting life of the moray eel. Applause! What an amazing creatures moray eels are. It was nice of you to participate with our information reports.
From your crazy friend, Sam :P
Sam, you are so supportive. It is awesome to see that you are going home, reading, learning and reflecting! Ka Pai! You are a Ruma Iwa Unstoppable yourself!!
DeleteWell done Neha that was an awesome report who knew moray eels where so interisting. WOW!!! I could read that 100 times if I had time. I love the racing car background it shows that moray eels are fast, strong, sneaky animals.
ReplyDeleteYou diffenly belong in Ruma Iwa Unstoppables.
From your friend Ashleigh.
Wow Neha!! That was such an interesting report. That report told me everything I need to know about Moray Eel's. You did a great job ordering it, gathering all of the information and making an awesome report. You are an unstoppable learner and attached to your own school work. That was a breathtaking experience and I learnt heaps. You had an informative and descriptive report and I am willing to read it again, again and again. Kai Pai and well done.
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Great job Neha. Your information report is so amazing now I now a lot about moray eels.
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