A wave of ecstasy sweeps over my body as I leap out of the rental car. A ray of warm energy hits my face and my eyes lay on the greenest grass you’ve ever seen, rolling over a clan of small hills and stretching for miles and miles. The ground is in a blur as I run to the place it was last seen. Blistering pain reaches me by the time I realise that I am here. I look around but don’t find it. Confusion and worried-ness seeps into my head. It’s GOT to be here!😦! Suddenly, I see it. It is the most miraculous thing you have ever seen, deep, haunting chocolate eyes and shining, silky red fur, giving the impression of a flickering flame, fierce but wonderful.
This is MY fox.
Go Z. I wish I could write like you too. Mel
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ReplyDeleteI love you writing, I wish I could write the way you do. I think you are amazing and I could picture the Fox in my mind. I love the way you described what the Fox looks like. I really like your small moment. Well Done!